Fifteen years ago a young Colorado Springs police officer arrested a teen runaway accused of aiding a convenience store robbery and attempted murder. She was innocent, but still served prison time briefly. Her testimony sent the real thief to jail for much longer. Now she’s a young widow raising a son, and the man she put in prison is free and seeking revenge. She moves to a home in a new neighborhood—then learns that her next-door neighbor is the by-the-book officer who arrested her. Now he’s a Colorado Springs P.D. Lieutenant. Like it or not, he may be the only one who can protect her and her son from the past he helped create.
Doesn’t that sound like a suspenseful read? It is. I couldn’t put it down and highly recommend it.
So read on about how coincidences can alter your life, then leave a comment, and you’ll be entered in the drawing for a copy of THE PAST CAME HUNTING (either in print or digital—winner’s choice). And for more information about Donnell and her books, drop by her website at www.donnellannbell.com.
And now…Take it away, Donnell!
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Conflict or Coincidence: I had to Choose
If you’ve been writing as long as I have, chances are you’ve received your share of rejections. There are myriad reasons a book is rejected– Pacing’s off, too much backstory, failure to hone one’s craft, the story doesn’t resonate with the editor or agent, lack of conflict, the story feels contrived, it’s cloudy, the agent doesn’t care for her new haircut. . .
In my case, however, my book was rejected because the agent or editor couldn’t buy a coincidence. Which for me was a little hard to accept because I’ve been the recipient of coincidence my entire life.
When I was in grade school, my mother took my little sister, my friend and me to the movies. Charlene and I coerced my mom into letting us watch the show from the balcony, and eventually Mom relented. Excited, my schoolmate and I gathered our popcorn and soda, scrambled up to the second floor like the big kids, and while tugging off my coat, I knocked my soda off the railing. On the way home, my sister cried that some idiot above her had drenched her with a drink. Oops.
In fourth grade I had my appendix removed. A nurse entered my room and said that a boy around my age had been severely burnt in a fire. The nurse wondered if I might be willing to spend some time with him. I agreed. Turns out, I dated that boy my sophomore year in high school. At a dance I put my arms around him and felt the scars through his shirt. He explained he’d been in a fire as a boy. When I asked how it happened, we were both amazed as we remembered our talks in the hospital.
Last February when my husband and I went to Key West, my cousin ad her significant other gave us a tour of the island. After she took us back to our bungalow, she said, “You’re staying here?” Worried we were staying in a disreputable place, I replied, “So far. Why? What’s wrong?” “Nothing,” she replied. “It’s just that this is the same bungalow your mother stayed in with your brother when your dad shipped off to Okinawa 55 years earlier.
My future daughter in law and I were born in the same hospital in Lubbock, Texas. She lives in Fort Worth, I live in Colorado Springs. An innocent conversation about where we were born confirmed we were both born at St. Mary’s Hospital. I ask you: What are the odds?
Last but not least, the coincidence that hit me the hardest was learning that my dad passed away on the same day as his father, sixty-one years apart. That is an incredible, emotional coincidence I find myself thinking about every June 29th .
As you can see, I’m no stranger to coincidence, which brings me to the focus of this article. During my stint at the Citizen’s Academy, I asked some deputies what’s the worst thing that could happen during the course of their career? Without hesitation, one deputy answered, If an ex-con moved next door to me.
I’d been plotting THE PAST CAME HUNTING for some time by then, and that comment provided the ideal solution for me. I needed a conflict for my protagonists, one an ex-con, the other a police lieutenant. I heaped on additional conflict by adding their teenage boys to the scenario and making them inseparable. Contrived? Maybe. But I think I made it work. Further, if I would have moved Melanie down the street or into a different neighborhood, I would have lessened the conflict, and it wouldn’t have been the same story.
Conflict or Coincidence, I simply had to choose. For me, it made sense to pick the latter.
Have any coincidences altered your life for the better or worse? Leave a comment and maybe win a copy of THE PAST CAME HUNTING. Good luck!
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Hi Donnell!
Great points about coincidences–oh, and remind me to sit BEHIND you in a movie theater .
What I’ve found in the dozen + years I’ve been writing and submitting is that life is often far more bizarre than anything I could dream up –however, we’re not allowed to write stories that way, for fear of being accused of these “coincidences”.
It IS a real prejudice that I’ve run into also, however, it’s been my observation that as with so many other thing, once we break through . . . and become nearly as famous as Ms Kaki . . . things like these are easier for editors to overlook. So it’s just one of those things where we have to prove ourselves first.
Congrats to you for having this much success with a debut book that was turned down due to coincidences. BTW, I LOVED it and the coincidence didn’t bother me! Can’t wait to read your nest book!
T. So great to see you here, and, yes, I look forward to the day I can write nearly, almost, semi-famous on my bio. So far, I’m writing obsure and unknown Really, you won’t sit with me at the movies?
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I won’t sit in front of you. And beside you is questionable if you have an uncapped drink.
I ask you: Have I EVER spilled anything on you at Crested Butte?
Goofballs both. I’ll have my people make room for your people so you can sit by me in the movie and bask in the reflection of my almost nearly semi-famousness. It’s the least I can do.
Okay. So you outgrew your clumsiness? I’ll sit with you both!
Hi Donnell!
I don’t have any stories about what I’d call coincidences, but I know a ton of things in my life have fallen together with almost eerie timing. And my husband ALWAYS has the best possible scenario happen to him. We call him “Butter Side Up”.
It’s almost a rule that fiction must include at least some coincidences, imho. The trick is helping the reader believe in the jump, forget it’s even a stretch. Since your work is backed by Kaki, I have no doubt you’re a wiz at this!
Good luck with your debut!
Hey, G. I know you’ve been really busy with your own debut blog tour, so I appreciate that you took the time to come by. I see UNDER THE SAME SKY is doing great! Excellent!
Thanks, so much Genevieve. Love “Butter Side Up” What a great slogan, and if he’s always lucky, I’d hold on to him! Best wishes on your debut as well!
Hi Donnell
As you know I LOVED this book. It was fabulous and can’t wait for your next one. You’re on your way to the top! Now I can say I knew you before you got rich and famous.
Cher
Cher, thank you! Do you think I might ever be as big as the nearly, almost famous Kaki Warner? I can dream, can’t I? Did I tell you she’s a great co-pilot
Thanks so much for your nice message!
Donnell, you’re my new hero — you used the word “myriad” correctly!
I’m going to download your book onto my Kindle right now. I’ve been meaning to do it for a while, and I’m leaving for a week on the beaches of the Dominican Republic on Thursday. This will be a perfect read for the plane!
Oh, Helen, yay! That made my day! Errors happen, as you well, know. Spell check and auto correct have the darndest way of taking what an author meant and turning it into, “what the heck is she talking about?” I’m honored that you’re going to download The Past Came Hunting. I hope you enjoy it. It’s in our neck of the woods, and I had a ton of fun writing it! Have fun in the Dominican Republic, and don’t worry about us palefaces up here
P.S. Helen, I’m a former newspaper editor, and the use of myriad was drilled into “my” head. Amazing how may ways I see that word used. Have fun on your trip!
Hi Donnell,
I don’t have a coincidences that directly affected me, but it was for my parents. We grew up as kids in Sonoma ,Ca, we moved when i was 7 up north as my Dad felt there would be some better opportunites job wise. So he left his job and we all moved. It turns out that he could not find steady work for 10 years. So he and my mom decided that he should look for work else where and to make a long story short he got a great job on the same street as the job he left 10 yrs earlier!
Thanks for listening and not minding my spelling.
Julia Blevins
Julia, I don’t mind your spelling in the least, as a matter of fact, you used affected perfectly. Do you know how many of us mess up on that word. Well done, and thanks for letting me know I’m not alone in this coincidence jazz. Coincidence happens to me all the time! I think that should be my new middle name. What do you think? Thanks for stopping by!
What a wonderful story, Julia. Thanks for sharing. And good luck winning a copy of Donnell’s book. It’s a great read!
Hi Donnell,
I also tend to think of coincidences more as divine timing! It seems that an idea will be planted in my head, and then I’ll run across people that same week who will say something that exactly confirms my thoughts or encourages me. Or I’ll read something that seems like it had to have been placed in my hands for a reason! But in just thinking of the nice normal kind of coincidence, I met my husband in an astronomy class in college. (Really, we looked at the stars together). I said I’d never marry a cop, and am married to one, living in a town I swore I’d never live in, and worked at a job I had never planned to do. So I guess we never know!
How you got into the head of a teenage boy for this book, I don’t know, but that was one of the things that stood out to me. I enjoyed them as major characters, because it was different from anything I’d read. Definitely a page-turner and good combo of suspense and romance. Great job!
P.S. I checked out your website and love your writing advice. Can I subscribe to my own personal newsletter from you? Just send me something every Monday? (Wednesdays and Fridays would work, too).
Thanks for coming by Christina. Didn’t I tell you Donnell’s book was great! And how is your own writing coming? You remember that question you had on research? Donnell has great writing tips on that. She does ride-alongs and visits PDs and once even got herself arrested for…no wait. That was somebody else. But she’s a great resource. Glad you went by her website. And be watching for her second book later next year.
Yes, thanks for the connection to her. I am inspired by these first-time published authors! I discouraged myself last night by reading too much about what editors want. I immediately felt like I was drowning, so I turned off the computer and just tried to forget ALL of it! Ha! I love sharing my journey with my family. My kids give me great ideas. I was told my hero needed a dog. I think I’ll leave that to you!
Oh, gosh, Christina, I am number one grateful you shared your coincidence, and also the thoughts on divinity. Don’t think that didn’t cross my mind when I went to record my dad’s death in our family Bible and saw my grandpa’s date of death.
Love that you had other intentions but life steered you in a different direction. You belong in a book! And thanks so much for making those comments about Luke and Matt. A lot of publishers didn’t want teenagers, they said they detracted from the romance, but I *needed* those teenagers to up the conflict. Luke and Matt feel very real to me. I miss them
LOL. I’m going to add some other articles to my website. But here’s something. Anytime you need something from me, just contact me via my website. I will be the first to tell you, I don’t know everything, but if I don’t know I have plenty of people I ask. Did I mention, just last week I contacted the nearly, almost semi-famous owner of this blog and yelled, “Help?”
She came through. Always does. She’s a great co-pilot. Thanks so much, Christina!
Thank you! I will be contacting you. I just liked you on FB so I’ll get your updates there. I should say that the nearly, almost semi-famous blog owner is actually famous in my house. I won her book, and the family now knows her name. She has been very helpful in connecting me with people and resources. Maybe Luke and Matt need their own romance books, when they’ve grown up a bit??
Cristina, Kaki and Theresa and I brainstormed a possible sequel for Luke and Matt at last year’s Crested Butte Writers Conference. It has definitely possiblities, but I have revisions and another book to complete first. Which reminds me I better get back to it! Contact me anytime!
LOL, Donnell, I got a big kick out of Helen’s comment about ‘myriad.’ I thought the same thing — it always gets used wrong. Coincidence that so many editors/journalists/grammar ninjas are here today? I think not.
Loved your blog post — I totally believe that coincidence is a part of life. Or maybe it’s fate or ‘meant to be.’ Whatever, the truth is stranger than fiction adage is so true. Your life is proof: you definitely wouldn’t fit into the “one coincidence per book allowed” rule!
Glad “The Past Came Hunting” is doing so well – congrats and continued great success!
Thanks, so much, Liz! Funny that you mentioned the one coincidence per book rule. Because I had two in The Past Came Hunting, and my editor said, uh-uh, no way, no how. One coincidence, your reader will buy, two, you’ll get killed. I have to admit to being the coincidence champion of all time, I get that writers can’t have too many in their books, or it just dilutes the story. Thanks so much for stopping by!! When is your book coming out?
Can’t think of any coincidences happening to me right off. The book sounds awesome and I’d love to be entered to win. I will be putting it on the to buy list just in any case!!
Hi, Martha! thank you for commenting. I hope you win! Remember, for the next two weeks it at a deeply discounted price at KOBO (e-reader) and Amazon Kindle. Wow, you’ve never had a coincidence? Interesting!
I have heard a lot of good thing about your book The Passed Came Hunting so I can’t wait to read it. The only coincidence that I can thing of happen to us several years ago. Both my husband and I worked at a job for 21 years and they came in one day and told everyone they where closing the next day. We lost our job, vacation pay and everything over night. A few months later we both got a job at a different place and they layed us off after about six months. Then we both started a new job at a new place, then husband had a stroke and it put him off work for a few months while I started the new job at a wire factory. Husband finaly got to come back to work and then the top factory in town called him to come and work for them and this happened the day before the wire factory anounce that they were closing. Now 9 years later my husband is still working for the top factory in town and I still don’t have a job but we can get by on what he makes.
Gosh, Quilt Lady, that’s tough! Those are sad coincidences. I’m glad you make due on what your husband makes, that says a lot about your discipline. I’m curious do you make quilts, based on your call sign. I think that takes a lot of creativity and talent. If you do have a chance to read The Past Came Hunting, I hope you enjoy it! Thanks for commenting today!
Talk about going in circles. Wow, Quilt Lady, that’s a credit to both of you that you kept plugging along. Good luck on winning a copy of Donnell’s book. That might cheer you up some, right?
Love to read this new book ‘The Past came Hunting’…by Donnell Ann Bell..sounds very suspenseful….can’t wait to see how it comes out..the sneek preview made me want to read it for sure……………………….babyruthmac16@yahoo.com
Linda, thank you. You’re entered in the drawing. I did my best to make it very suspenseful. My heroine had a really tough trek before she found her happily ever after. Thanks for commenting. If you read the book, I hope you’ll let me know how you like it! Gnight!
It’s a really good book, Linda. I highly recommend it. Let’s hope you win a copy. Thanks for coming by.
I do make quilts but its been a while since I made one. I really just do the piecing and my sister does the quilting on her quilting machine. I need to buy some baby fabric and make some baby quilt I have about gave them all away and there is a new baby coming in my hubbys family in April. I started having a lot of problems with my hands so started reading more instead of piecing quilts, need to get back into it though. I have looked in my fabric stash and I don’t have much in the way of girl baby fabric, so I need to make a fabric run to Lexington on a pretty day if I can find a pretty day anymore.
Best wishes that you find just the right fabric to make that baby quilt. Wonderful talent and use of your time!
I have had some odd things that I really dont like to talk about alter my life for the better. I had no idea at the time and thought it would be for the worse. And it did involve quite a leap of faith and a complete life move and change. But it has worked out so far. And I do believe I will be better off for it.
Donna, this post reminds me of Garth Brook’s remarkable song, “Unanswered Prayers.” or Robert Frost’s, “Roads Less Traveled.” You just never know. I believe struggles and not always having things come easy, not only build character, but eventually lead us in the right direction. I believe you will be better off, too. Best wishes and thanks for commenting!
Hi there I believe it is conflict n coincidence creates many human destiny. For example me I want to become a journalist because I came from difficult background n I understand the need to fight for the justice through the power of media
Aretha, that’s excellent. I hope you succeed in your goals! Thank you for stopping by!
Hi Kaki, Hi Donnell,
try to remember any coincidences that altered my life but seem nothing happens. i love reading about coincidences happens in book and always find it but sometime abit annoying when the coincidences happen in many time that make it sounds ridicilous ;(
Hi, Eli: Yes, a circumstance that an author throws in can just seem preposterous. I think it’s a true author talent to make a coincidence believable. I hope you’ll check out THE PAST CAME HUNTING and let me know if I pulled it off. Trust me, if you think I didn’t, I can take it. Authors learn from readers. Thanks so much for commenting! Happy Friday!
Hey again, Eli. Thanks for coming by. You’d love this book. Good luck!
When I read this blog I went right out -30 miles away to the nearest new books store. And got 1 and 3 need to order 2. I am trying to catch up as you are a new author to me and I want to pass you on to my blog readers and my used bookstore … Will get back to you after I read the one I am on and the first of yours….
Dona! Oh my goodness. I am so honored. 30 Miles. I think I should send you gas money ma’am. Thank you so much for ordering my book. You have made my day, weekend, heck the entire month! I hope you enjoy it and let me know if you don’t. I’ll try to do better. Happy Friday!